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Lost Dream

May I thank all of you who take the time to follow my blend of storytelling. Getting feedback and knowing that my output is seen is rewarding, so my thanks are overdue to Rochelle who ensures that the Friday Fictioneers site run smoothly. There is a quite a variety of flash fiction on offer on the Friday Fictioneers site, so if possible do check some out.

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Photo copyright: J Hardy Carroll

I knew the first time I called at your house that I loved for you. You thought it was puppy love.
You said that you needed to go, to help those in need in Africa. The moment that car hit your scooter it stole my heart.

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  1. Dear Michael,

    Oh dear. Sad story that leaves the reader hanging and wanting to know more. Nicely done.

    Thank you for your kind words. You and other writers in this community are the reason I keep at it.



  2. So much said in half the allotted words! Brilliantly done, Michael.
    And great preamble. The sharing and responding to of each other’s stories is so important for this group to really work.

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