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Storm to the Rescue

Copyright Sandra Crook. Thank you Sandra for a photo that allowed me to revisit one of my old stories.
Copyright Sandra Crook. Thank you Sandra for a photo that allowed me to revisit one of my old stories.

Storm could feel the psychic pull: but Issy had been sent to Diamond. In Issy’s case the force had allowed no leeway. Yet Storm understood that those who paid the Force had a choice as to which destination they when to.
Storm turned her back on the surface canal system and Force’s head office. Now she had a mission: rescue Issy. As she made her way to Alps, Storm went over what she knew about Diamond. Importantly the canal system there mirrored the system on the surface. Now all Storm needed to do was locate the entry piont to Diamond…

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Mike prior to his visit to the barbers.
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  1. Dear Michael,

    have to admit this is a little hard to follow…too many names packed into 100 words. I get it that Storm has a dangerous job ahead of her. Might be the right time to take that novella out and rework it. Time can put distance between us and old writing. When we come back to it we see new things. Yes? Bravely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  2. Thank you Rochelle, I pruned and pruned, and distorted what I wanted to say. But having said that I have rediscovered the dystopian world of Diamond. Yes there are to many capitalised names.

    1. Storm and Issy will have to be strong individuals if they are to take on the Force who administer Diamond. I have the outline of a full length novel about them floating around my head. Ouch…

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