Working Together

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We had a dream that together we would be stronger. Eiji told me that I would see Mount Fuji, even if he could not. He said that we should ride as far as possible then walk. This his dream had told him. So today we set out from the university, I would be Eiji’s eyes and he would be my determination. You see I lack drive, everyone tells me that except for Eiji, he just says that I have not found my chosen path yet.

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This Post Has 23 Comments

  1. Iain Kelly

    Great take on the prompt – they make a good team.

    1. Michael Humphris

      They certainly do. Thank you Iain

  2. Jade M. Wong

    Aww they do sound like they make a great team. Heartwarming story Michael!

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you so much Jade

  3. Moon

    Wow! That’s what exemplary friends are like !
    A very uplifting story, Michael.

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you so much – Moon

  4. Keith's Ramblings

    A tender tale indeed. Nice one

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    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you Keith, – I really felt for both Daisy and Michael

  5. Priceless Joy

    How nice that they fill in for what each other lack which is determination and eyesight. Lovely story Mike!

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you so much PJ,

  6. EagleAye

    Beautiful. A single stick breaks easily, but many together are strong. They’ve got the right idea.

    1. Michael Humphris

      That’s so true, each gains from the other, thank you so much for the word beautiful.

  7. kiwi

    A great team and yes finding your path drives motivation

    1. Michael Humphris

      Motivation is so important, thank you Kiwi

    2. Michael Humphris

      Fascinated by Kentsugi (art of mending using gold) a new concept to me which is great.

  8. hombrehompson

    That is wonderful.

    1. Michael Humphris

      You motivate me to carry on writing. I find giving good feed back quite hard, so thank you.

  9. yarnspinnerr

    I identify with this. Parallel lines are together forever.

    1. Michael Humphris

      That is true, thank you Yarnspinnerr

  10. Kalpana Solsi

    Mount Fuji is waiting for the wonderful team. a great story of bonding.

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you Kalpana, I am afraid that the team has been and gone, but they thank you for your support

  11. athling2001

    Well done. Good message.

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you athling, I appreciate your supportive comment.

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