Lost in time

Photo curtsy of Jean Hays

Photo curtsy of Jean Hays

One thousand year after humanity left earth, three individuals came together, the Force knew them as Storm, Issy and the Fox. After meeting on Diamond they decided that it was time that earth’s people where allowed back to their natural home. To ensure this happened they would take on the Force and it leaders. The Force governed to control individuals. Those from earth worked like slaves in clothing factory’s, producing clothing for other planets. Occasionally humans were selected for genetic improvements. Storm and Issy where two such improved individuals, unfortunately for Force its control of them had failed.

Mike attempting to  write.

Mike attempting to write.

This Post Has 26 Comments

  1. neilmacdon

    May the Force be with you

    1. Michael Humphris

      And with you Neil

  2. Susan A Eames

    Inventive take of the photo prompt! Well done.

    Susan A Eames at
    Travel, Fiction and Photos

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you so much Susan,

  3. draliman

    I reckon the Force is going to lose this one.

    1. Michael Humphris

      Indeed they might

  4. Sandra

    Very imaginative – well done.

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you so much Sandra,

  5. rochellewisoff

    Dear Mike,

    I’d say Storm and Issy are a force in their own right. Nicely done.



    1. Michael Humphris

      They certainly are, sadly at the present time I can not give them justice

  6. Liz Young

    There’s a longer story lurking in your 100 words – well done!

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you Liz, I do have quite a lot of back story for Storm,

  7. Keith's Ramblings

    They are going to regret improving Storm and Issy I suspect. Nice one.

    Here’s my story!

    1. Michael Humphris

      You are so right Keith,

  8. granonine

    Poor Force is going to be left out of the fun, I think 🙂

    1. Michael Humphris

      At the present time it seems likely that the Force will be dismantled by Storm and her friends

  9. 4963andypop

    I expect these two will lean a strike! Interesting dystopia.

    1. Michael Humphris

      I believe that Storm and her friends will create havoc

  10. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Sounds like humanity might be free again (wonder if we can handle that)

    1. Michael Humphris

      Now that is an interesting point. It is to be hoped so.

  11. Brenda's Thoughts

    Storm and Issy worked the system and will now use their enhancements to fight against it. Great piece of sci-fi!

    1. Michael Humphris

      Brenda they can work magic if my muse will allow them,

  12. Abhijit Ray

    Realistic enough. Soon someone may arrange a contract job to supply aliens items like food and clothing cheap. Humans, men and women will be forced to work hard, till they revolt. But will they? A bulk of us work like slaves to for big suppliers in the US, and Europe. Instead we shall work for some aliens on a different planet. It will be a promotion of sort.

    1. Michael Humphris

      We do not know when or where change will arrive, but I hope and pray for better things in the future.

  13. Tannille

    Oooo… more to come?

    1. Michael Humphris

      I am sorry to say, indeed more is in the pipeline,

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