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What if

What if

The quiet one was alone, wondering, nothing made any sense. She had been a bright spirit, full of energy, whilst he had been the wanderer. He had drifted around the oceans, but always he returned to her. She was his fountain of love, of knowledge and excitement. Now he realised for the time being he must drift no more. He would stay and be her protector.

Always it was the same, he found freedom and kinship, it was so natural amongst these beings, but always they aged and died, leaving him alone. Sadly he decided that time travel to this planets ocean was bad for his soul. Yet he loved the sense of freedom that living as a whale gave him.

 

This Post Has 17 Comments

  1. rochellewisoff

    Intriguing tale, Michael. I liked it.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  2. ceayr

    Cleverly built tale, Michael, but I confess that ‘time travel’ rather confused me.

  3. Snow's Fissures and Fractures

    Oh my, this is so beautiful and imaginative.

  4. FabricatingFiction

    Oh I feel his loneliness!

  5. aliciajamtaas

    This is a bit bleak, but so lovely. I too thought of sailors at sea. Glad I left it alone – you did so well with the idea.

  6. jwdwrites

    Interesting story Michael, I like what you did with it. I also like the paragraph above about our community of writers. 🙂

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.

  7. lingeringvisions by Dawn

    Fountain of love…my favorite from this romantic tale.

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you Dawn, I am glad you liked this story,

  8. spicedmullings

    Life on earth is evanescent is what he found!

    1. Michael Humphris

      It’s true he found that memories could be tinged with sadness. Mike

      1. spicedmullings

        Thanks!

  9. wmqcolby

    Very cool, Mike. I like the idea and the execution. Well done!

    1. Michael Humphris

      Thank you so much. Mike

  10. patriciaruthsusan

    I liked the unexpected last line, Michael. He indeed was a free spirit in every sense of the word. I also loved your introduction. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne

  11. Emily Livingstone

    What an interesting world! A spirit from another world living as a whale–makes me want to read more!

    1. Michael Humphris

      That’s a kind comment, thank you. Mike

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