Two girls riding camels
Genre: Humour and Risqué mixed, I hope…
“I ask you what’s a girl to do Marge, me man’s gone and done a bunk, he’s now in India, after working as a lumberjack in America, he’s a real globe trotter is my Malc”.
“Cheryl, let him get it out of his system, he will return when he’s sated his appetite”.
“But Marge, it’s his appetite that I am worried about, he near worn me out with his demanding ways. You know what he’s like. You slept with him”.
Aye I did, but that was when he was nought but a kid, before he upped and married you. He’ll calm down one day”.
“But I don’t want him back all worn out; a girls got needs you know”.
“Cheryl perhaps we should take a leaf out of his book, they say that Australia has gold and men with plenty of sap”.
“Let go, Marge it sounds like my kinda place”.
My story this week might be considered slightly risqué but it is meant to also be alittle humorous. Do let me know what you think. As I am considering trying to build a set stories around Marge and Cheryl…
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I’d certainly read more of their stories.
Thank you Iain, I hope I can come up with the goods.
Hahahaha! It is humorous and a great story! Cheryl and Marge are quite the characters! LOL!
Thank you PJ, I am not sure as yet where I may going with this pair, perhaps another prompt will guide my pen.
LOL! Maybe so….
🙂 Interesting take.
Hi yarnspinnerr, I do hope to use more snippets of dialogue in my future posts, using dialogue has challenged me, plus has led to Some interesting comments
I shall look forward to reading them.
They will return I am sure, thank you, yarnspinnerr
Ha ha ha, I like these stories they’re fun!
Then I must try to write more about their travels. I was so pleased to read your comment, thank you.
This one was fun. I hope to read more of them in the near future.
I certainly hope to tell more about their travels, although others in my fictional catalogue are clamouring to get out. I was really pleased to read about how my story about these girls travels came across. Thank you for taking the time to comment Sonia.
Funny story.
One has to have alittle fun when writing fiction sometimes. I am pleased that the story came across in fun. As that was what I had intended.
I loved the dialogues.. great story Michael
So kind of you to say so. I am experimenting with dialogue, as I find it adds another dimension to writing flash fiction
true that!