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So be it

Photo copyright: Yvette Prior
Photo copyright: Yvette Prior. Be warned my Genre today is risqué

“Times are hard mam”.

“So they be, but I want my dosh girl”.

“ don’t worry, Yo’r get it tonight, the big man pays plenty of bucks”.

“he does, but watch yourself, don’t let him try to get on top of you, he’d flatten you for good”.

Laughter

“That’s why he needs me, he can’t do it with his missis”.

Footnote: Genre: Risqué.

A fine day at Mevagissey
A fine day at Mevagissey
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  1. Excellent writing. You’ve done well in catching the tone of women talking about sex, which is distinctively different from the way men talk about it. And you’ve given us a very deft, economical sketch of the characters of the two women.

    1. Pleased to hear from you Dale. So far Sussy has not given me permission to post more, even though a sequel, of sorts, has been written. I am going to try and turn it into dialogue that is acceptable to her.

    2. Pleased to hear from you Dale. So far Sussy has not given me permission to post more, even though a sequel of sorts, has been written. I am going to try and turn it into dialogue that is acceptable to her.

  2. Again, superb job with your dialogue. You created a clear scene and solid characters with so few words. (BTW … I said last week I’d try more dialogue and ‘chickened’ out this week … maybe next!) Have a nice weekend! =)

    1. Thank you so much Brenda, I am hoping to follow up up this weeks post, with more dialogue, if I can find the right words. It will be a challenge. I think that dialogue only turns up occasionally, your turn will arrive, when the right prompt turns up.

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